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Let me be honest. I am finding this difficult. Now, I like a challenge, a stretch, a bit of an obstacle course. “Write about the decline of the British Empire in the form of a narrative poem in which your protagonist is an artichoke” I read, and flex my fingers. “Write a haiku to evoke the sensation of sibilance using only the first half of the alphabet.” “Well”, I think to myself, “this should be fun.” But “write about a system that isn’t working”? A system that isn’t working? Now? In 2026? ONE system? My favourite system that isn’t working? The sexiest system that isn’t working? The one giving me the most angst day to day? The one giving me the most existential dread? I am, as I say, finding this difficult. I will own that I have contemplated writing a thousand words on why the steady “all on” setting on my fairy lights is the EIGHTH of seven options which must be sequentially activated to get there, because that is a system that some fool came up with and it definitely doesn’t work, and now who is paying the price, eh? But how can I write about my fairy lights when…. When…. When….
Comments (12)
Lovely haiku! Good luck 😁
Beautiful!! I love the idea of a constellation being the thing in the sky!! Great work Angie!
Aussie flavour! Awesome! ☺️ 👍
I really enjoyed this one!
What a great piece of nostalgia.
bravo
Such rich lines! Really created an atmosphere in a few words!
well done
I used to be obsessed with constellations when I was a kid. Loved your poem!
I feel that connection so strongly in this.
This Haiku is really anchoring, Angie, I feel its sense of place without ever having experienced it. Really excellent entry to the challenge!
This is beautiful, Angie. Well done.