My Love is a Fictional tale
Day 10/30: A series where I write a poem every single day for 30 days.
Keeping it silent, safe, quiet in my heart
My Love is a bit strange; don't know where to start
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It's something with no eyes
It overlooks any lies
It's bitter with a few joys
It's never Hi's only Bye's
It's something that's above my soul
It's a fragment that makes me whole
It's a fuel that could melt the coal
It's a journey and it's without a goal
It's a bird with silent song
It's a feeling with nothing wrong
It's a heart with profoundness strong
It's made up of LOVE and YOU along
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I'll keep; keeping it silent, safe, quiet in my heart
My Love is a Fictional tale, and the hero tore me apart
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A/N:
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About the Creator
Maryam Batool
Turned 18!
I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others
Life's HARD, trust me! I'm already a little tired. But, I gotta live anyway!
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Beautiful imagery and Emotional flow! Congratulations on reaching 150, Brilliant Job! 👏
Oof, that last line hit me so hard because it was so relatable. Loved your poem!