Poetry

Draft: De-cluttering
*If you want to skip ahead to the part I want feedback on, scroll down to the header labeling the drafted poem below. Lately, I have been having trouble with endings. Starting poems or prose is the easy part. A line comes to me and often starts as a quick note in my phone. It's easy to run with it, but where do I stop and how?
By Kay Husnick3 years ago in Critique
A Review, Before My Next 100. Top Story - August 2023.
This article is my 100th ‘story’ on Vocal, so I think it’s a good point to stop and reflect, before I move on. This community came at a perfect time!
By Mo Darasi3 years ago in Critique
"Unlocking the Mystery of Human Mastery: A Comedy of Cosmic Ironies"
In the grand stage of existence, humans strut with pride, Believing they're powerful, on life's thrilling ride. Yet within their core, a locked abyss does dwell,
By CosmicClip3 years ago in Critique
Inconsequential Woman. Top Story - August 2023.
I am an inconsequential woman. I lurk in the shadows, a note flung in your trash, alien scent on your shirt, trophy lace in the back of your drawer.
By Teresa Renton3 years ago in Critique
The Battle In Her Mind. Content Warning.
You are such an idiot!!! Tell me... Why do you even allow it? Pick up the DAMN phone and call for help! Tell someone! Anyone! Write a note!
By Petra Rattan3 years ago in Critique
Keep Criticism Constructive
Introduction Vocal has four new Communities, and although they are not for me, I feel I need to have at least one post in each Vocal Community and I can always find a reason to write about almost any subject.
By Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred 3 years ago in Critique
Request for Critique. Top Story - August 2023.
Well, I'll be honest when I say that I have no idea how this community is supposed to work. So, here is a foray into the unknown!
By Matthew J. Fromm3 years ago in Critique