TomorrowโTwenty
Happy Birthday Komal ๐ค
She's famous for her Visionary Thoughts
She's an Aquarius she hits right at all spots
She has a humble soul and a ๐จ๐๐จ๐จ๐ฎ ๐๐ฉ๐ฉ๐๐ฉ๐ช๐๐
She would punch you with words if try to act cool
She's ethereal, enigmaticโ She a pure bliss
Her stories are LOVEโ She a perfect CHEF'S KISS
She's KOMALโ A delicate and soft embrace
A heart that radiates warmth and gentle grace
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Happy Birthday my dear sweetheart
You are a beauty and your heart is a delicate art
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Not today; but wish her a sweet Happy Birthday tomorrow... And as a giftโ Follow her :)
About the Creator
Maryam Batool
Turned 18!
I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others
Life's HARD, trust me! I'm already a little tired. But, I gotta live anyway!
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Comments (15)
Aww this is so beautiful and you describe her so well.
Happy Belated Birthday!
Happy belated Birthday โฆ๏ธโ๏ธโฆ๏ธ
What a stunning tribute to Komal! Your words beautifully capture her essenceโvisionary, sassy, and full of grace. I'm sure she will feel all the love on her special day. Happy early Birthday to her! ๐โจ
Supersweet & Beautifully written Maryam! Happy Birthday 2 KoKo!
Happy birthday, komal!!
Aww, this is so cute! Happy birthday to her๐๐
๐โค๏ธ๐โจ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ Maryam, what an incredible ๐ก idea for a birthday card on Vocal. I love this so so much!
Happy birthday to KOMAL A beautiful birthday message from a,but a devoted sister to her sister Thank you,Batool, I am proud of your loyalty
From the depths of heart, a very sweet birthday wish and gift! It is such an amazing poem, and the drawing is incredible; your creativity shines through in it as well.โจ Wish you a very happy birthday in advance, Komal. โญโจ
What a nice gift for your friend, well done! ๐
Such a beautiful and heartfelt birthday message! You captured her essence perfectlyโvisionary, strong, and graceful all at once. Sheโs lucky to have such a sweet and thoughtful friend.
Awwwww, this is so sweet and heartfelt, Maryam! ๐ฅน๐ Thank you for this beautiful birthday wish. Iโm in awe of not only your words but also the stunning picture you drew of me.๐ Itโs like you captured the essence of my soul in that artwork! Iโm truly honored to have such a thoughtful, talented friend like you. Iโll take the sass and the soft embrace combo any day, haha๐. You really know how to make someone feel special! Thank you again for filling my day with joy. ๐ค๐ซ
Whoaaaa, you can draw too?! You're so talented! Like look at that art, it's magnificent. And you putting that bubble gum there made it have a 3D effect. So cool. Gosh, you're amazing! Now onto your poem, I loved it so much. So sweet of you to write her a poem. Happy Birthday Komal! ๐โจ๏ธโค๏ธ
that was a wonderful advance birthday wish message.