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The Blessing Trap

Poetry on Blessings

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 11 months ago • 1 min read
The Blessing Trap
Photo by Priscilla Du Preez šŸ‡ØšŸ‡¦ on Unsplash

Beware what's inside gift boxes. --Michelle Liew

šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™

A box, on my patio.

No sender, no note.

A wicked gleam surrounds it---

The look that beckons---

šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™

UNWRAP ME.

šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™

It seemed a blessing.

Inside, dollar notes, bundled up.

A mink cloak, finally, my style!

A crown with rubies---now, why not?

šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™

I flaunted on the street

Cloak billowing, coins jingling.

A mere glance at peasants---

I mean, my neighbours.

šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™

And then---

šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™

My cloak, moth eaten.

Gold? No more.

The crown---iron.

šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™

The townsfolk laughed.

šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™

Their blessing.

šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™

My gifts now, untouched.

šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™šŸŸ¤šŸŖ™

This poem is entirely original. AI tags are coincidental.

inspirational

About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Mother Combs11 months ago

    Don't set your worth on things, but on people <3

  • Sometimes, things are always too good to be true. Loved your poem!

  • Gregory Payton11 months ago

    Hidden meanings, I will check gifts from now on. Well Done Michelle!!

  • Always check gifts from unknown sources , excellent work

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