Red Eye In the Dark
White-gray ash
By Darla M SeelyPublished 2 months ago โข Updated 2 months ago โข 1 min read
Photo by Jonas Gerlach on Unsplash
Red eye in the dark
Breathing slow in white-gray ash
Waiting for the wind
About the Creator
Darla M Seely
I am 58 years old. I love to write poems, crochet, take photos, and make scrapbooks. I write poems about Jesus, love, friendship, how to improve, forgiveness, my cat, holidays. I enjoy making afghans for friends, family, taking photos


Comments (9)
Congratulations! Love the last line.
Congratulations on your win!
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Wow, Darla, this Haiku is absolutely stunning. Congratulations on your winโฃโค
congrats Darla
One of my favorites here! Congratulations, Darla๐
Love this. Congrats!
Oh, this might be my favorite I've read for the challenge - absolutely magical haiku, Darla! So gritty and feeling - congratulations on placing! :)