Radiant is what they call you
Shimmering and bright
Effervescent, cheerful,
Perpetually light.
But I know the truth
That you wallow in pain
Self-pity
Self-doubt.
That you lash out
When you can hold your facade no longer.
I know you are hurting
And secretly want out.
Out of the spotlight.
Out of this world.
I attempted to help you
But I wasn't enough.
I could not give you what you needed.
So go on,
Shine
Be bright
Be effervescent
Be light.
Just remember...
Radiance can cause burn.
About the Creator
Julie Lacksonen
Julie has been a music teacher at a public school in Arizona since 1987. She enjoys writing, reading, walking, swimming, and spending time with family.
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Beautiful poem!β₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈ
I really appreciate how you explored the idea that brightness can sometimes hide suffering. The final line is especially powerful and leaves a lasting impression.
Gracias Julie
Powerful Makes me want to fly high into the sky RULE
This was so poignant and emotional. Loved your poem!
Excellent poetry, Julie. I love all the wording and especially the references to bright and radiance just made this poem glow.
Julie, this was beautiful. The ending had a surprise punchiness to it.