PSA- Loneliness
Public Announcement Challenge Entry
Attention all, a hush has spread across the world
its cause identified as screens that never sleep
Your devices glow like watchful eyes beside your bed
and the silence they create grows deep
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Reports confirm constant scrolling drains the day
though signals stay strong and everything seems fine
Connections waver, thinning out along the way
until the heart and soul walk a lonely line
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Effective now, all citizens are urged to leave their rooms
to walk outside where unfiltered breezes roam
Ride bicycles without a single ping or buzz
let the nature around you call you back home
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Dinner parties are recommended weekly by the Board
with phones surrendered to a drawer for safekeeping
Conversations may feel awkward at the start
but warmth returns while laughter’s leaping
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If hearing someone’s real voice startles you at first
stand steady as the moment passes by
This is a normal symptom of prolonged device exposure
and it fades away the more you try
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Remember, parks remain available for human use
their pathways built for footsteps, not social media feeds
The city still welcomes your presence in its streets
and nature has something waiting to fulfill your needs
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This concludes the formal notice filed today
though one unofficial line must still be read
loneliness thrives not from lack of connection
but from living through a screen instead
About the Creator
Sara Wilson
I love Ugly Things.
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Comments (24)
I love this! Congrats on your win!
Outstanding work, Sara! I make a point of monitoring my tech time, and I cannot imagine living without quality time spent outside in nature. Congratulations on your win! Remember, I told you before that you were one to watch on this platform. I am extremely pleased to see your name at the top of these results.🌹
Congratulations on your win.🏆 Excellent take on the challenge… well said.💖
Wow!!! Super Impressive writing, Sara. The rhymes paid off and I can see why. They flowed with ease and the message was pure gold. So happy for you!!!! 🤩
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Screens truly are the gap in human connection, so sad but so true. Congratulations Sara, extremely well written. x
Beautiful and congratulations on your first win! Way to go!
the relevance and urgency of this message tho... congrats on your win, sara! this work is superb and oh so important 💙
This is spot on, and beautifully said! Wish I’d seen it sooner but I was glad to see your name show up as a winner on the challenge announcement :) Great work, well deserved win! And not for nothing, this is a sentiment that the modern reader absolutely needs to internalize, so in addition to the legitimate value of the poem as art there’s a vital message in your announcement itself.
An amazing piece! Congratulations on your win!
CONGRATULATIONS ON WINNING LASSIE!
Congratulations on your win, Sara! 🎉✨
Great writing and congrats on your win! 🥇 👏🏼
I felt this on a personal level. Your PSA is poetic and necessary.
This a slam dunk Sara! Bravo! 💪🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
So well said Sara. Can't be said enough...we are breeding the loneliest generation - if only they knew it. Best of luck/
My favourite announcement thus far!
💖The cadence of this announcement was impeccable. As I moved through the internal rhythm, I was struck by the visceral way the bicycle gears sounded in my ear, perfectly capturing the absence of a digital 'ping' or 'buzz'. 💖You successfully made the outdoor world seem more enthralling than our screens. The pathways built for footsteps were brilliant; it’s as if the physical world has become alien to us. Placing that side-by-side with social media highlights the chasm between reality and the virtual.
Devices glowing like watchful eyes is a creepy image, and scarily accurate! Great work!
Woah. This is beautiful and very important. Sara, this should place and if it doesn't we riot. I mean, you don't need to. I'll riot enough fir both of us Well done. Love the sentiment and the crafting.
This is a great announcement. I especially like the note at the end!😊💗💖
I felt this one in every fiber of my being! Brilliant, on point & inspiring! This is a Winner! Get it gurl! 🫶🏾💕💪🏾
Lover it, Sara. We have all become slaves to the mobile phone and technology. All the pastimes that mattered seem to have disappeared.
"If hearing someone’s real voice startles you at first" Omgggg, of we ever reach this stage, we're a lost cause. Loved your poem!