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Out Hiking.

Breathless Haiku of Now.

By Novel AllenPublished about 13 hours ago 1 min read
Out Hiking.
Photo by Fenghua on Unsplash

Lord Jesus, the hill

I can hardly breathe...holding

steadfast...up I go.

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Novel Allen

You can only become truly accomplished at something you love. (Maya Angelou). Genuine accomplishment is not about financial gain, but about dedicating oneself to activities that bring joy and fulfillment.

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  • Tiffany Gordonabout 5 hours ago

    I can relate! Lol Well done Novie! 💕

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout 7 hours ago

    I'd just rather roll back down, lol. Loved your Haiku!

  • Sam Spinelliabout 9 hours ago

    The line break between holdout/steadfast makes the structure of the poem itself feel like a winded climb. Nicely done :)

  • Sid Aaron Hirjiabout 12 hours ago

    Still too icy for hikes here but I feel you. Need my gallon jug

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