I
tu
Amour, amore
I feel
étais
give me more
amore, amour
I don't speak French or German
liebe
I feel better
I
toujours
Amour, amore
I feel better with you
dans mon esprit
I feel better with you in my corner
immer an meiner Seite
je du we
I only speak English
Je t'aime, je nous aime
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Paul Stewart
Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.
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Cassie and Johnny
I’m the kind of dame you notice. I’m no femme fatale, but you can’t ignore me, at least not until I warn you about what’s coming, then everybody ignores me. Hell, they usually blame me afterwards and give Johnny all the credit for saving the day, but my Johnny couldn’t save a seat at the movies without my help. Sure, he’s brawny, but brainy? Not so much. Like that time I asked him to spot me five bucks, and he said he didn’t see it anywhere on me, and believe you me, he looked but good.
By Harper Lewis5 days ago in Critique
Comments (25)
I’ve done a little French and German over the years.. but the only word I got was amour pretty much.😅 Tres bien!😄
This is fabulous I love it 🌺🌺🌺ps I only speak Wiganease lol
Je ne remember pas mon François auf school 😂 I always appreciate the randomness of your creativity, Paul! Well done on the leaderBoard placing 👏👏
Wooohooooo congratulations on your Leaderboard placement! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
I'm baaaaaaaaack, to say congrats on honourable mention Paul!! 🎉
Well written, congrats 👏
How playful and creative! I've got a little French rattling around in the old noggin but no German! Anyways this was great!
It's been a fews since my French has grown rusty, but I do know this is a poem about love! 😅
haha, I can tell you don't speak french, my friend, but I liked your poem!!
Wonderful love poem!!! Gonna love it!!!
Sounds like you do speak a bit of French
Cleverly done Paul and even though you may not speak French or German, the meaning and intent still comes through.
Same here, & you made me translate all those lines into English!!!!! Beautifully woven, Paul.
All I know is that this was lovey dovey hehehehe. Loved your poem! 🍩🥐
Uh... Qué?
lol, nicely done. Even if you don't know what the French and German words mean, you still know what they mean <3
Clever!!
Mais oui? J'adore le message ici, M. Stewart!
Sounds like a song! Love this! Well done!
Très bien mon ami! J'adore ce poème avec le mots de français! The German is okay too, I guess.
J’ai adore, Paul! Ich leibe dein Gedicht!
Trés bien - c'est un beau poème!
Very pretty even though I’m ashamed to admit I don’t understand all the french
Nice poetry here ✍️⭐️⭐️⭐️🍀
My French is very rusty, but you love your friend very much. I do not know German except for a few words. Good job.