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Heavy Gray

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By Andrea Corwin Published about a month ago 1 min read
Heavy Gray
Photo by Md Samir Sayek on Unsplash

clouds opened their throats

releasing winter's rain streams

wetting the pavement

Copyright © 1/30/2026 by Andrea O. Corwin

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Andrea Corwin

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Poetry, haiku, fiction, horror, life experiences. Written without A.I. © Andrea O. Corwin

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  • Julie Lacksonenabout a month ago

    Lovely Haiku! 💜

  • Madison "Maddy" Newtonabout a month ago

    Beautiful!

  • John Coxabout a month ago

    This retains the seasonal thematic elements and visceral nature of the traditional haiku in the modern urban environment, Andi. I love it!

  • Aarsh Malikabout a month ago

    I felt that winter chill through your words. So vivid.

  • Susan Paytonabout a month ago

    Clouds open their throats. Brilliantly crafted. Nicely done Andrea.

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Oooo, rain pouring down clouds throats, that's so brilliant. Loved your poem!

  • Tiffany Gordonabout a month ago

    Fabulous work Andrea! 💕

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