Should I?
The Dawn of Humanity: A Kayleigh Fraser Unofficial challenge
Wonderā¦ delightā¦ ignite, explode within! Magenta, cyan, yellows swirlā¦ Euphrates joins her three quicksilver sistersā¦ rushing past my ambling feet. Havilahās golden nuggets rest alongside onyx. Luscious fruit drips exquisite nectar... cottonwool lambs frolic with frisky lion cubs. All mine to enjoyā¦ exceptā¦ eyes linger; hand outstretchedā¦ just one bite?
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Authorās Note: I hope itās obvious that the Bibleās Garden of Eden is this storyās context!
Written for: The Story of Humanity, Kayleigh Fraser Unofficial challenge (50 words exactly).
I first learnt of the challenge while reading JBazās story (see below) & was inspired by it.
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Comments (6)
Yes, your context was very clear and your story was soooo gorgeously written! I loved it!
Bravo! Such poetically crafted context. Great micro and challenge entry!
Fantastic work! Really wonderful wordsmithing, could tell right away that the story was on Eden :)
I definitely got the context. You so beautifully immersed us into paradise and temptation! Nicely done āØšš¤šš
Exquisite great take on the challenge
I got paradise from it, Angie. Nicely done.